dean langmuir

Hormones demonstrating

the seek of the mind

reminiscent of my own

Was my Son's

at the age

of questioning


With,a Jolt

the enquiries

refreshed aspirations

with each breath

I took

As,I Focused,on mellowing

his puberty.


Knowing flaws

enshrined in Love

Will pass

their best.


As a Father

if,he doesn't prick me.

I'll feel

I have failed.


We need to raise

individual souls

who can flourish

with the nourishment

of being themselves.









  • Author: dean langmuir (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 8th, 2022 18:46
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 25
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.


  • L. B. Mek

    simply Beautiful, dear Poet
    thank you

  • dean langmuir

    Thanks Lb,you take care.

  • crypticbard

    That tension and balance when we have teenage children, with this I can relate. That they are enabled to thrive as their unique selves is a cherished goal and challenge. A very real poem. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.

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