Do me a favour

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  Paul Bell June 9th, 2022 04:25

  Sometimes there's help, and that's great, but sometimes you just want people to listen to you.

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    sadkw33nJune 9th, 2022 08:09

    Indeed. When you're fighting your battles and you're struggling everyday, it's just tiring to also have people who pretend they care to deal with too. Thanks for commenting!

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  L. B. Mek June 9th, 2022 05:30

  'Cause if i meet your eyes
  I will struggle to fight'
  
  'Cause your words aren't enough
  Too fake to light up the dark'
  
  'Do me a favour and don't ever come close
  Cause this "puppy eye" look
  that says "I'm sorry for you"
  Is what i hate the most
  Do me that favour'..
  (indeed
  we must be wary, of our own
  intensions
  for however, impassioned our intent
  for good
  if all our presence, adds
  is toxicity, to that individuals
  Fight..
  then, we must Learn
  to surrender
  so as, to Empower
  that individual's, right
  to interpret
  the worlds, as and how
  they wish to..
  we just have to find
  the strength
  to offer them, the distance
  they need
  while being ready, to catch them
  should they ever
  call out for us
  at sometime, in the future)
  a Brilliant write!
  thanks for sharing, dear poet
  sorry for messing with your poem
  and for my lengthy comment
  try to believe
  I meant no disrespect, in doing so
  just got carried away
  with your poetry's, profound message

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    sadkw33nJune 9th, 2022 08:14

    Thank you very much! It's my pleasure to read your comments, you always have something interesting to say. So don't worry about the length. Just write what you want to write. I promise I'll read it😉. Thanks for your flattering comment again my friend!

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  JudyStella June 12th, 2022 13:50

  All so true, people pretend like they care and and ask us to be open but when we do,we find that they are not really willing to listen as they offered. At the end of the day it’s not their problem and we are left alone. But at some rare occasions we come across people who really care and who are willing to listen. But it pisses us when people tend to pity us, it’s not like we are asking for sympathy but a little bit of understanding and a shoulder to cry on. The content is really relatable!

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    sadkw33nJune 12th, 2022 13:55

    Thanks! I'm not sure I'm glad you can relate, but I'm definitely glad you liked it and commented on it. Sometimes we just don't want somebody's fake concern lingering around us. I think I'm better off alone than with people who pretend they care. It's better this way... lonelier but better.

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    JudyStellaJune 12th, 2022 15:11

    Can’t agree more!