Sitting on the edge of my bed reluctantly forcing my feet
into my one-size-too-small Sunday heels, I look for my left sock
my eyes drift to my black school shoes
its leather body peeling off revealing its white shell
and its velcro trap mixed with bubblegum
I cringe knowing that my mother will scream at the mess on my feet Monday morning
still, that’s ‘more bearable than having to contort my flat feet
into the arc of a crescent moon
pinching my toes to form a triangle in my
ballet slippers on Tuesday ‘I thought
a smile spread across my face and excitement rushed through my veins
when I saw my sneakers thinking about my final Wednesday march
in the distance, I heard the church bell echo throughout the village
its vibrations bounce on cars and buildings reminding everyone that mass will soon start
I hop down from my bed knowing soon my name will be the one echoing throughout my house berating me for making the household late again
frantically looking around my room
I saw my bright pink unicorn slippers
and a montage of Papa and I's Thursday
trips to the ice cream shop sprinted across my mind
"Perla hurry up" my Nana hollered
my eyes now anxiously searching my bedroom floor
I spot my sock under my combat boots
the ones I saved up for five months just to wear to Austin’s birthday party this Friday
"Perla don't make me call you again" my Nana echoed
I sigh forcing my left foot into my sock
and then tripping over my blue high heels I bought for prom this Saturday
as I tried to find the other side of my Sunday Heel
‘I really hate Sundays’ I whisper to myself
- Author: Mhea (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: June 11th, 2022 20:50
- Comment from author about the poem: This is the 2nd poem I have EVER WRITTEN! I am open to receiving CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Context: I am trying to write about the days of the work by expressing them through shoes. Hope you enjoy
- Category: Children
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Comments1
I love your sentence structure, unlike some poems, yours genuinely tells a story, and the imagery you call upon is powerful. I can clearly see this poem in my head.
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