I thought all of my hope was gone until i heard your voice
You showed my broken down body of bones that i still had a choice
And i did everything a person could do trying not to hurt you
So i pray to God that he'll be with you, don't let this upset you
But i won't make it through the night
Don't forget me
Or any of our memories
Keep me in your heart even when the flowers by my grave start getting old
And remember
Life will soon get better
Let me hear you cry so I'll know i had a life that was worth living for
I didn't think it would work out cause i was such a mess
But you broke through all my walls somehow and became my best friend
And I've heard that you've been wearing so much that blue t-shirt lately
The one i got you from the thrift store when i was broke on your birthday
You couldn't be a better friend
Don't forget me
Or any of our memories
Keep me in your heart and all of our pictures on your wall
And remember
You couldn't have loved me better
It's selfish but i hope you'll wait a bit before moving on
I'm sorry that i left
But please don't forget me yet
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Author:
sadkw33n (
Offline) - Published: June 12th, 2022 03:33
- Category: Sad
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Such a heartbreaking poem. It portrays the lowest moment in ones life. And the beautiful friendship shared between two souls. It’s really heart wrenching ! Well written my friend ❤️
Thank you! I've been thinking lately about how i want my best friends to remember me when I'm gone. I hope they can keep me in their hearts and stick to the good times. This is the only way i can keep on living if i die. Through their thoughts, the way they'll talk about me and reminisce the days we spent together, through the feelings we shared. It probably sounds sad, but i find such comfort in that thought.
Thank you for commenting! I hope i get your opinion on my other poems as well. It's always nice to hear from you!
So true, I had similar thoughts as well. Long after our death memories will continue to live on through friends reminiscing good old times and it’s also important to remember whatever the good we do is remembered even after death and same goes with the bad. Keep sharing your thoughts! And I’ll check all your poems soon❤️
I guess we're more alike than i thought! Thank you for sharing your thoughts as well and encouraging me to keep sharing mine. And thank you for being so willing to check my poems! I'd love to know what you think of them. Also i hope to see more of yours again soon😊
I agree! It’s my pleasure 😊 Thankyou for encouraging me too🥰
best we can do is set a good example while we're here.
Indeed! We should do what good we can while we're here, and hopefully we'll be remembered for it.
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