Eloquently influenced
my manner
shifted
the presence
of what I seemed to be.
This change
of scenery
you see
is still me.
An elegant illusion
- Author: dean langmuir ( Offline)
- Published: June 15th, 2022 13:54
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 10
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
Comments1
simply Beautiful, dear Poet
I couldn't help but try
and poetically reply
with these
little scribbled words below
thanks for sharing!
(like a fluttering leaf, we glide
to and from, at the mercy
of fate's, whim
yet, knowingly we still entrust
ourselves to be sculpted
and perfected, by those
who caress our existence
with their guiding presence
for
when we eventually, lay
on that inevitable, dirt pillow
we'll know
that which was gifted to us
as our life's
brush strokes of eloquence
we allowed
to make Art of our cherished
life...)
Thank you Lb your comment was beautifully written,you take care.
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