-Eloquently influenced-

dean langmuir

Eloquently influenced

my manner


the presence

of what I seemed to be.


This change

of scenery

you see

is still me.


An elegant illusion

  • Author: dean langmuir (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 15th, 2022 13:54
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 10
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.


  • L. B. Mek

    simply Beautiful, dear Poet
    I couldn't help but try
    and poetically reply
    with these
    little scribbled words below
    thanks for sharing!
    (like a fluttering leaf, we glide
    to and from, at the mercy
    of fate's, whim
    yet, knowingly we still entrust
    ourselves to be sculpted
    and perfected, by those
    who caress our existence
    with their guiding presence
    when we eventually, lay
    on that inevitable, dirt pillow
    we'll know
    that which was gifted to us
    as our life's
    brush strokes of eloquence
    we allowed
    to make Art of our cherished

    • dean langmuir

      Thank you Lb your comment was beautifully written,you take care.

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