It always rained when we were together
When I was under your arms
When my skin was on yours
Even if it wasn't predicted,
The sky shed its happy tears
When we were together, close to each other
The one day we were to meet
It was predicted to rain
But the only tears that shed were mine
Because
You would never be with me again
I wouldn't be under your arms
Close to your skin ever again
Comments1
did you mean 'that' for this line
'*The* one day we were to meet'
or else your first line is a little confusing..
but anyway, that's just me being pedantic
lol
thanks for sharing, a lovely read
Hi:), yeah it does make alot more sense but i just felt like *The* makes the 'day' alot more significant in my head.
all good then, 'The' is perfect!
I'll go ahead and un-confuse myself
lol
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