Memories

Blueledge

When I'm old 

and my moments are few. 

I'll take my last breath 

with memories of you. 

  • Author: Blueledge (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 20th, 2022 00:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: To give this poem context. I lost my daughter in 2008.
  • Category: Family
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • arqios

    A plural you is very heart warming and a singular is like the whole world entire between two souls. Thanks for sharing.

  • Blueledge

    Thank you.

  • sadkw33n

    So sweet! I hope you'll have lots of beautiful memories by that time! Great job at writing this. And I'm sorry for your loss. Stay strong.

    • Blueledge

      You're so very kind.

    • L. B. Mek

      oh no..
      I'm so sorry for your loss, dear Poet
      may she rest in peace
      (I was just about to say how
      overtly sweet and cute this write was
      assuming it was just a random love confession poem..
      thank you so much for the context
      I would have been gutted
      if I'd misread your words that badly)
      laud your bravery, stay Strong!

      • Blueledge

        Thanks LB. I knew it was important to tell what the context is. I would have made the same assumption as you.



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