Senryu 18



publishing my dreams


dripping the ink onto lines


one day, may come true…




  • JudyStella

    Dreams do come true!❤️

    • Teddy.15

      They do my dear JudyStella, thank you for coming by to say. 💖

    • Paul Bell

      Never stop dreaming, or the earth will stop.

      • Teddy.15

        Maybe that is what I dream of? LoL 🤣 hey Paul, always a pleasure to see you my friend. 💖 Thank you.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Excellent image to adorn your appealing Sen. thank you dear Teddy for the lovely reminder that dreams published are even more likely to one day come true.

        • Teddy.15

          My dear Fay, thank you dear friend. 💖

        • tallisman

          So good at these!

          • Teddy.15

            I have made an edit on this dear Tallisman, I just adore the small yet big poems, if you ever want to try I'll be happy to give some tips. 💖

          • evenwheniLie

            Short; but like Giotto drawing a perfect circle.

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you dear evenwhenilie, very kind of you to come by to say. I adore senryu and haiku. 💖

            • spilleronsheet

              In your senryu, I found my ambitions wishing with sincere cries…those ink deepen with passing my time…maybe in vain but still I try…truly moved by your senryu dearest teddy….

              • Teddy.15

                My dear spills, no pain no gain, keep up your ambitious mind will win. Thank you dear friend. 💖

              • Vamsi Sudha

                Dear Teddy you are so cool at 5/7/5. I somehow struggle to write in a succinct manner...Good one !!

                • Teddy.15

                  Well I'm sure you can if you try, I was lucky to have met a few excellent teachers along the way so perhaps I can do the same for you anytime. 💖 Thank you dear Vamsi

                • Goldfinch60

                  I am sure your dreams will come true Teddy.
                  Good Senryu.

                  • Teddy.15

                    Coming from you dear Andy, means a lot, but I believe we all can make our dreams come true. There are a lot of wonderful moments to be had. Things seem tough for so many at the moment, but positivity is a great tool, and you have it more than most. 💖thank you.

                  • orchidee

                    Keep dripping. Aww, they called me an old drip! lol.

                    • Teddy.15

                      Oh yes quite like myself LOL 🤣 💖

                    • L. B. Mek

                      I await with, baited breath
                      utmost belief, in your talent!

                      • Teddy.15

                        Wow, such a kind hearted poet you are. 💖

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