this is absolutely bloomin splendid
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there, I've drawn the line beyond which this particular form has now been breached ... excellent aint good enough a word in my humble opinion .................... Neville
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Oh Spiller, haiku....again. 3lines speaks volumes. Good one
Thanks a lot dear Vamsi….Trying my best to get a haiku/senryu…..its been long since I wrote one….
Just when you think, this is it, it turns on its head. Life seems to be a bit cruel today.
Life was bitter thorn….i looked for roses but alas it only pricked and bled my soul…
this is absolutely bloomin splendid
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there, I've drawn the line beyond which this particular form has now been breached ... excellent aint good enough a word in my humble opinion .................... Neville
And you make the gloom go away and fade and flowers to blossom from ear to ear….thanks dear Neville….
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