Self-Introduction: Tom

Coldstorm

Self-Introduction: Tom

 
My name is Tom
I was born into a poverty family
When I was a kid
I always got beat up by other children
My parents always scold me and beat me
I aren’t got no friends in this cold world
I was a quiet boy, after I went to secondary school
I walk alone, eat alone, sleep alone
Nobody cares about me
Even I suicide nobody will know my pain
My funeral only oxygen will attend
I’m a born loser, trash, troublemaker, dumb person
This is my self-introduction

Written by ColdStorm
  • Author: Coldstorm (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 25th, 2022 06:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is my first poem, welcome everybody give me some opinion and idea to my poem. Thank you. Caution: Don't suicide
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 23
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Comments1

  • dusk arising

    Read more poetry on here. Develop your style, be self critical. Look for the best, make yourself one of the best. Don't expect it to happen overnight, be patient with yourself.
    Learn what it is that makes you write.

    • Coldstorm

      Thanks for your opinion



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