A sharp blow below
Searing heat
Burning
Coursing
Throughout
A blow to the mind
Pushing contents out
Quickly
Jarring
All around
Teeth and fist clenched
Desperate to lash
Grinding
Biting
At my inner core
Body and mind disconnected
Feeling unhinged
Tearing
Twisting
Split in two
Comments3
I feel the emotion deeply in this poem
(yeah, I too am scared of my own rage
at times
when that switch, kicks in
it feels like there is no limits
to my callous indifference, whoever
is before me
in that moment, I am so grateful
that I am such a weak existence
but then, maybe
had I any power
maybe my rage wouldn't be so
all-consuming..?)
a great write! a brave write!
thanks for sharing
Great piece, somehow it captures an emotion, a part of me that exists yet I cannot word it, however this poem is enough for me to know that it's there
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