I love you.
I love your hair and your eyes
You're smart and so nice
You called me the prettiest girl in the world
You texted the same thing to 12 other girls
You would tell me that you loved me
When I let you touch me
And if I didn't.
Things got ugly
If you loved me
Why would you block me?
So in reality, I hate your dumb blonde hair
And I hate the way you looked at me with those stupid brown eyes
You are not smart when it comes to love
And you are not so nice
But what I hate most about you is that I can't hate you
Not even in the slightest.
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Author:
JadeLynn06 (
Offline) - Published: June 28th, 2022 00:40
- Comment from author about the poem: What you did to me
- Category: Love
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Comments2
For a first poem it's really good. Without meaning to sound patronising it reminds me of the angstroms of love when I was a youngling!
yeah, I get it
the poetic voice, is so unmistakeably
full of youth..
(btw this is a good thing/ a compliment
us oldies find it hard to write in that voice
try as we might..)
lol
'Why would you block me?'
new technologies, to induce
timeless emotions...
(thanks for sharing)
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