Ocean of Teardrops- Villanelle

Dove

When an ocean of tear drops fill your eyes
And the sands of time pierces your soul
When happiness drifts away like the tides

Forget the heartache, swallow your pride
Remember the greatest secret ever told
When an ocean of tear drops fill your eyes

Stand up straight, and hold your head high
Brave the fierce winds and cold
When happiness drifts away like the tides

Let your heart beats  warm your insides
Lets its rhythm make you feel whole 
When an ocean of tear drops fill your eyes

May the sunshine of love come alive 
Let its warmth inside you take hold
When happiness drifts away like the tides

Let your radiant smile materialize
Because, only you can make yourself whole
When an ocean of tear drops fill your eyes
When happiness drifts away like the tide

  • Author: Dove (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 6th, 2022 04:41
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Dove.

    • Dove

      ThanksšŸˆ

    • MendedFences27

      Well done. Seems a difficult form to do. Yours is craftily done. The theme of love lost and the ocean is expertly utilized. Truly enjoyed your poem. _ Phil A.

      • Dove

        Thanks , itā€™s an honor coming from you as I admire all your work.

      • Neville


        this is one of those that one feels compelled to read from the title down .. and then, to read it over and over again .. not to check the form, but to marvel at it .. I know I have said it before, but I do take my hat off to You and indeed to anyone that can pull this kind of poem off ... this is however, particularly brill and I aint talkin fish neither ... ....... ...... Neville

        • Dove

          Thanks Neville, this is one of my favoritesā€¦ Thanks for stopping by

        • L. B. Mek

          'Because, only you can make yourself whole'
          Amen!

          • Dove

            Thanks, thatā€™s my favorite lineā€¦ much appreciated



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