The gir

T.C.O.30

I'd give it all
to meet you once more
just to wave you though the halls
to get a hug that made me feel it all
to lose myself when you're around
to get the butterflies and so
And may you be the stealer of my dreams
the regular in my thoughts
But now...
Shall you stay the friend of mine
in this world of ours.

  • Author: T.C.O.30 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 6th, 2022 15:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hi, so here is a little 'poem' that I wrote because I can't get over my first crush. It's my first time writing and I know it's not goo/ but thought I should try .
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 7
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  • L. B. Mek

    this write is good, trust me..
    the response you receive
    is not a reflection of your poetic
    skill or ability
    for few so-called, poet's
    can read or choose to..
    most
    poetry, in our century is sadly
    more self-involved, than ever
    a narrow perspective, cheap
    roleplay-therapy, session
    if you will;
    so people rage in-to their, dear dairy
    of ink
    hoping to heal themselves
    and yet, finding
    it hard to read back
    their own works and comprehend
    let alone, have the awareness
    to read and appreciate
    some stranger's words..
    (so
    be kind to yourself
    as its unlikely, other's
    will be kind to you
    in life
    for no reason)
    keep writing, keep growing
    keep nurturing your, sense
    of worth, and confidence;
    Thank you! for choosing to share
    dear Poet

    • T.C.O.30

      Thank you soo much for this comment ! It's kind of exhausting checking for the comments every 2 seconds .

      • T.C.O.30

        Thank you soo much for this comment ! It's kind of exhausting checking for the comments every 2 seconds .



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