Lifes little trip

Poetic Dan

When silent scream echos through the pathways in your brain

 

Blackness endlessly showing what will never get played

 

Each moment is torture not knowing if it's home or away

 

Fingertips become numb a need to tighten to get a grip

 

Forever learning how to loosen up on lifes little trip

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 8th, 2022 04:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: This truly felt good to release the darkness and not keep it in, write ourselves free and keep the positive vibes.... thanks to the worlds poetry tribe
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • L. B. Mek

    Brilliant!
    and thank you! for inspiring
    these feeble words, below
    as my attempted poetic reply..
    (tepid, at our outset
    vehement, at our finish line;
    this 'little trip of life'
    be it consumed
    wholehartedly or tentatively
    makes no difference
    when
    that drip of fated second, ticks
    its last tock
    we but - resume, our eternal visage
    of perspectived, blank verse
    in that universal existence,
    of Poetic blank, canvas
    awaiting, that bleak
    crimson ink of fate
    to drip, flow and consume
    once again..)

    • Poetic Dan

      Boom.. so would so happily sit on a hill and watch the world go by my friend! What a blessing of a reply with not a cloud in the sky lol
      Have a wonderful day my friend

    • Neville


      Sadly, I like this Dan, very much enjoyed sir .. Glad you didn't keep it all bottled up ... that would have been most unfair .. AGT's Neville



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