As the cold water hits my skin, I feel finally at peace
No more pulling short straws
I can reveal what's underneath my otherwise hard-shell exterior
I never thought I´d get to see something so marvelous
Something so unique but intent to startle us
I can admit I´m afraid but enraptured by this beauty
That makes me want to live day after day
Facing the possibility of being held in contempt
Facing the sun that shines so brightly
that it reflects off the lake
My vision is narrowed, only focusing
on the beauty of this water hitting my skin
Everything is so marvelous
this is true beauty being revealed to me
in the most perfect of ways
on the most perfect of days
I'm glad I got to see something so marvelous
- Author: a thousand wishes ( Offline)
- Published: July 10th, 2022 14:16
- Comment from author about the poem: Actually. a friend challenged me to write a poem using the word marvelous and this was the outcome :) hope you guys enjoy it
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 15
Comments2
It’s er…. Marvellous!
Your next challenge is to do it in rhyme!
I'll try it out!
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