I really want to run away!
But where I'd go?
There's no one to pave my way,
Just me alone.
These places look pleasing no more,
These systems,they don't really adore!
"We love you!"
They really want me to stay.
I love them!
But I really want to run away!
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Author:
Sak_shi (
Offline) - Published: July 11th, 2022 08:37
- Comment from author about the poem: As a teenager,I face so many issues on a daily basis\\\\r\\\\nThat really tempt me to leave this world! \\\\r\\\\nPlease suggest improvements (if any)\\\\r\\\\nP.s This is my first English poem!\\\\r\\\\n
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
If you have thoughts like that you should see an expert first of all. I know it sounds cliché but it's probably going to help. You could perhaps talk to someone too, a friend or a family member, let them know how you feel and be honest. Hopefully they can support you in a way. It's scary but opening up can be the first step to your healing process. I wish you the best, and if you can't find anyone to talk to, you can sent me a personal message. Maybe i can help since I've been there. Sometimes talking to a stranger can be easier. Regardless, i hope you stay strong and find the helping hand you need.
Ok thanks:)
But it's really not that bad
The poem is a bit overdramatic lol
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