I've been so many different people
I don't even who I am right now
I've been running away from the people
that cared, so no surprise that I'm alone right now
It takes me back to when I used to be friendly
it takes me to back when my love was neverending
and all the people I have been
come together now
and then I live for me
It takes me back to when I was different
but not someone worth missing
it takes me back to when I was fishing for love
but always coming up short
praying to the above
but never receiving support
guess I had to know
guess I had to grow
Now its time go
with no love lost to report
- Author: a thousand wishes ( Offline)
- Published: July 15th, 2022 19:10
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 18
- User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
Comments2
(had to come back and read part one)
a great write!
(in my humble opinion)
impassioned in its purposed, goal
to share without filters
bravely, wording hollow feelings
into tangible, relatability!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
Thank you!! I appreciate your humble opinion 🙂
Respect+, after reading the other parts, i have no words for it really, i dont know about others but this one is the best among all the others... You wrote it so well, i mean hands off.... I trued to leave everyone too but they never showed there back to me and i am truly great full to them... I think you must have also wanted them to stay when you tried run away and ended up alone... If you are still going through it, i asure you that it's going to be just fine just keep going.... Sorry if it sounded strange but thats how i felt when i read it...
Best line for me is " with no love lost to report"
It didn't sound strange, and yes I think I did want them to try harder but honestly, I can't say it would have worked. I have a tendency to run away when I really want something. For worse. but it's okay and I'm glad they didn't turn their back on you because that's a mark of a good person or at the very least someone who really cares about you. Anyways, I am glad you liked this one and appreciate the positive feedback.
Yeah.. i think i must have used all of my luck when i found these guys.... Good writes= appreciation always
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