Versions of me (part 1)

a thousand wishes

I've been so many different people

I don't even who I am right now 

I've been running away from the people

that cared, so no surprise that I'm alone right now

 

It takes me back to when I used to be friendly

it takes me to back when my love was neverending

and all the people I have been

come together now

and then I live for me

 

It takes me back to when I was different

but not someone worth missing

it takes me back to when I was fishing for love

but always coming up short

praying to the above 

but never receiving support

guess I had to know 

guess I had to grow

Now its time go

with no love lost to report

 

  • Author: a thousand wishes (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 15th, 2022 19:10
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 18
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments2

  • L. B. Mek

    (had to come back and read part one)
    a great write!
    (in my humble opinion)
    impassioned in its purposed, goal
    to share without filters
    bravely, wording hollow feelings
    into tangible, relatability!
    thanks for sharing, dear Poet

    • a thousand wishes

      Thank you!! I appreciate your humble opinion 🙂

    • EmotionsOnwhitepaper

      Respect+, after reading the other parts, i have no words for it really, i dont know about others but this one is the best among all the others... You wrote it so well, i mean hands off.... I trued to leave everyone too but they never showed there back to me and i am truly great full to them... I think you must have also wanted them to stay when you tried run away and ended up alone... If you are still going through it, i asure you that it's going to be just fine just keep going.... Sorry if it sounded strange but thats how i felt when i read it...
      Best line for me is " with no love lost to report"

      • a thousand wishes

        It didn't sound strange, and yes I think I did want them to try harder but honestly, I can't say it would have worked. I have a tendency to run away when I really want something. For worse. but it's okay and I'm glad they didn't turn their back on you because that's a mark of a good person or at the very least someone who really cares about you. Anyways, I am glad you liked this one and appreciate the positive feedback.

        • EmotionsOnwhitepaper

          Yeah.. i think i must have used all of my luck when i found these guys.... Good writes= appreciation always



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