You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely

Neville

You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely

 

You would not care, to see me naked these days, surely

as indeed, I do thee ..

And although, these words of mine, mouthed soft are

meant for you, entirely

I fear their meaning, might get lost, in their dubious

migration, as they dance

their way, from me to you, across the skies and seas ..

Indeed, each scar I wear

today, as God is my holy witness, I do bare for thee ..

And so remember this

dear heart, each stone they cast to drive me from thy bed

did once leave the hands

of hypocrites, and liars, who wear their own shells darkly ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 20th, 2022 02:44
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    I might swoon! Fido will save me from falling. lol.

    • Neville



      I hope not, it might do you good 🙂 ................................ Neville

    • Fay Slimm.

      Expertly penned this letter of longing and love that though seems forbidden still lives despite thrown stones. This little gem of a read goes into my list of faves for sure dear Nev..................x

      • Neville



        well I neva .................................... God bless ya, dear lady Fay .................... x

      • Doggerel Dave

        A brief sketch of a much deeper truth there, only a hint of a whole complex relationship in less than congenial circumstances.
        Provokes curiosity which I doubt you will satisfy, Neville.

        • Neville



          Thank you Dave ................................ Neville

        • AlitaOpal

          This brought me to a passage my mother read to me growing up..

          Nothing in all creation is hidden from God. Everything is naked and exposed before his eyes, and he is the one to whom we are accountable.

          Hebrews 4:13

          Awesome write 🎈

          • Neville



            I am sure your mother was a wise woman my friend .. thank you for visiting my little scribble today ... Neville

            • AlitaOpal

              Always a pleasure

            • Bella Shepard

              Scars that are exposed , painful but lingering, memories difficult to dislodge. Soul baring my friend.

              • Neville



                Thank you Bella, my fine literary friend ..... Neville



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