Memories

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  L. B. Mek July 22nd, 2022 04:08

  erm, this is a little scary
  may i ask
  what is it, your muse
  did
  to be subjected, to such
  a ritualist - form
  of assassination
  is this
  some kind of Halal, mercy?
  lol
  (flipped it on ya, eh?
  forgive me
  for being rude, hope
  you can understand
  why I turned to humour
  to take the obsidian edge
  of these, rather bleak
  read
  dear cherished Poet)
  thanks for sharing
  

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    sorenbarrettJuly 22nd, 2022 07:23

    Thank you L. B. for your review and comment. Yes I was hesitant to post this but it has a deeper meaning. It should be titled A poet's memories. When words are stopped as by a cut throat and every drop of inspiration is drained the rest becomes apparent.

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    L. B. MekJuly 25th, 2022 01:54

    ahh ok, so less literal
    phew...
    and yes those cut throat's
    drain us, of something much more
    precious than our money or time
    usually, the dispirited state
    we're left, after dealing with all their Bul sht
    puts us out of commission for a long while
    kinda like, that bitter aftertaste
    of a pint from the bottom of the barrel
    just before it gets changed, you scowl
    and promise yourself, you're
    just gonna stick to lager's instead
    at least there's no mistaking
    those barrel bottom thin heads;
    until, you get a fresh cold one
    in your hand again..
    then the feel returns
    and the games, begin
    again...
    lol
    stay Strong! dear cherished Poet