Peaceless

sorenbarrett

A feeling that I can not describe is deep inside.

It ligers, ebbs and flows

I sighed, tears of blood I cried

The sadness no one knows

It breaks my heart and tears me apart

It's an anguish in my mind

I can not chart how it did start

Peace I can not find

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 25th, 2022 21:16
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • dusk arising

    Fine description of how something can completely unbalance us so that we are no longer what we were, what we were used to being. When something so devastating it strikes at the very core of our existence and of where we fit in this world.

    Evoked memories for me of times when i was lost. Well written compact piece.

  • L. B. Mek

    to untangle a tight knot
    we never, wade-in to that
    impregnable core
    instead, we steadily
    begin to work from the looser
    outside threads
    ergo
    when dealing with such
    debilitating, issues in our lives
    we must first identify
    a place, or point in our strife
    that's seemingly
    a little less painful to work on
    and then layer by layer
    progress after progress, we fight
    till we surpass that peace milestone
    and go-on to strive
    for serenity, itself..
    that's the sales pitch, ideal
    we'll take landing, anywhere near
    in the vicinity of that dream..
    the key word, as always
    is patience
    as-in, being patient with ourselves
    so as to believe, in ourselves..
    in Hope, we Intrust!
    stay Strong, dear Poet
    'simply, let it be' take your lead
    from there
    our illusion of power, shatters quickly
    in the face of fate, but
    that doesn't mean we're powerless
    merely
    we're fighting, outside
    of our weight class..
    (forgive me if this all sounds patronising
    I meant no disrespect)

  • sorenbarrett

    Thank You Dusk for your review and comment it is most appreciated.

  • sorenbarrett

    Dear L.B. It is always so nice to read your review. They are full of various points of view and much wisdom.



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