Peaceless

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  dusk arising July 25th, 2022 23:51

  Fine description of how something can completely unbalance us so that we are no longer what we were, what we were used to being. When something so devastating it strikes at the very core of our existence and of where we fit in this world.
  
  Evoked memories for me of times when i was lost. Well written compact piece.

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  L. B. Mek July 26th, 2022 03:36

  to untangle a tight knot
  we never, wade-in to that
  impregnable core
  instead, we steadily
  begin to work from the looser
  outside threads
  ergo
  when dealing with such
  debilitating, issues in our lives
  we must first identify
  a place, or point in our strife
  that's seemingly
  a little less painful to work on
  and then layer by layer
  progress after progress, we fight
  till we surpass that peace milestone
  and go-on to strive
  for serenity, itself..
  that's the sales pitch, ideal
  we'll take landing, anywhere near
  in the vicinity of that dream..
  the key word, as always
  is patience
  as-in, being patient with ourselves
  so as to believe, in ourselves..
  in Hope, we Intrust!
  stay Strong, dear Poet
  'simply, let it be' take your lead
  from there
  our illusion of power, shatters quickly
  in the face of fate, but
  that doesn't mean we're powerless
  merely
  we're fighting, outside
  of our weight class..
  (forgive me if this all sounds patronising
  I meant no disrespect)

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  sorenbarrett July 26th, 2022 07:06

  Thank You Dusk for your review and comment it is most appreciated.

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  sorenbarrett July 26th, 2022 07:10

  Dear L.B. It is always so nice to read your review. They are full of various points of view and much wisdom.