it's so absurd
caught in the jaws
of this terrible bird
and resigned to my fate
like no one could have heard
but that's just my luck
so i guess i am stuck
the flying fish fell
and well now he is fucked
caught in the grip
and cut short in the slip
straight through my heart
and straight through the lip
i feel so at ease
i must have a disease
eating away at my brain
but this humble fish
has never felt like this
so in love with the pain
so don't throw me back
i couldn't take that
swirling down the drain
- Author: Noah Malice ( Offline)
- Published: July 28th, 2022 23:16
- Comment from author about the poem: Rewriting and putting a new spin on a submission of mine from about 4 years ago. I think I like this version much better. Let me know what you think!!
- Category: Love
- Views: 37
Comments2
Lovely. The rhyme scheme gives it a good rhythm- I laughed out loud when I got to “well now he is fucked” lmao. I couldn’t find the original for comparison, but this one’s great.
thank you for reading!! haha i'm glad you liked that line, i suppose it is funny
there is an image for the saying
'never give up'
where a swan is all-but swallowed a frog
but the frog's hands are chocking
the swan
who is looking a little, perplexed:
(
https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/708754060076953365/
)
and I can't help thinking this image and never give up, theme
is the antithesis to your image and write..
lol
(a really good read and fun
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
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