Poetry is good food for the soul
Guaranteed to make one happy and whole
When life's vagaries take their toll
it's time for nourishment to fill this hole
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Author:
safina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 29th, 2022 00:46
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Comments6
That’s true! Hope you ok! Good write …
sorry i made a major typo error at the end of the second line. the word i was trying to convey and type was 'whole' and not 'hole'. it changed the entire meaning
so true!
what reassuring words, thank you dear poet
i am sorry i made a major type error typing 'hole' instead of 'whole' in line 2. glad you overlooked my lapse...and just recognised the message i was trying to convey
Feels rude to me...sure this doesn't need a 18+? 😊
thank you for pointing it out. it was truly a monumental typo error, that i overlooked before publishing. the second line does end with the word 'whole' and not hole
thank you for pointing it out. it was truly a monumental typo error, that i overlooked before publishing. the second line does end with the word 'whole' and not hole
made a major typo when posting my poem today. have edited it now to convey my true message
You are very welcome, N.
A great little quatrain.
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