Why doesn’t the sun rise anymore
My life is suddenly dark
Finding nothing left to strive for
All gone, so barren, so stark
All alone, in the wasteland of my life
Strewn with lost hopes and desire
balanced as on the edge of a knife
Between absolution and hellfire
Who took away all my hopes
Who took away my queen
And left me reeling on the ropes
Crying for what could have been
An Angel took you away from me
My heart is broken.in two
So why doesn’t the sun rise? you see
It’s because it cant shine on you.
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Author:
Tallisman (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Another poem taken down a few months ago due to a crisis in confidence. Apologies if you have seen it before!
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Tallisman you bring tears to my eyes with such heart felt words. I don’t think it would be possible if it weren’t relatable on some level. I hope you’re in a good place now; I hope you know how important you are.
This is so beautifully written. Loss and grief, we experience it and, somehow live through it. The traces are there, perhaps softened a bit with time, but always a part of us, to remind us of how wonderful what we had was. Wishing you good memories and comfort.
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