Onward in life
learning to unlearn
certain traits becomes
a great part
of our becoming
One we should never
underestimate
The big bend
in the river
we should never miss
The questioning of self
is how stick meets stone
The questioning of self
is how the fire
gets stoked
Otherwise it dies
we row wayward
get lost in the smoke
and never become
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Author:
Garth Rakumakoe (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 30th, 2022 17:58
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Comments3
Beautiful, though sensing a touch of melancholy. Nice way of expressing even the slightest of feeling. This is why I love poetry
A fine rhyme scheme and fab word choice wow. Kudos for the poem.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you dear writer. I shall do so.
Lovely poem .. interesting words ) liked reading this
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