Way To Life
Life...pleasant gift, not just for self, and so,
The time that we live, with many, it grows,
Into something called love, beautiful to begin,
Much good blocks the view, your unprepared for the end,
This feeling, this feeling, it hurts actors to pretend,
Nor calls to uplift, or a message to send,
Recommend, or suggest a better way, so to be,
And like the sun when set, a loving view you'd see,
Displeased at these...most things took for granted,
Like that flower that grew, from the seed you've planted,
Proceeds to next, whatever is left could be right,
Conceive at best for our God, this is the...Way To Life
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Author:
Raymond Jones (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 1st, 2022 12:13
- Comment from author about the poem: When we tend to fall off the road, or blindsided by the things, or people you want...you forget what you really need.. Sincerely Raymond Jones
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Comments1
even devoid of theological alignment;
this is easily one of the most powerful
works I've read this year:
'Much good blocks the view, your unprepared for the end,
This feeling, this feeling, it hurts actors to pretend,'
I could spend hours unpacking this
succinct and layered lines..
just a privilege to read and contemplate
thank you! for choosing to share
really like your refinement and choice wording
dear Poet
a great write!
Thank so much.
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