senryu 22


if you offer bread
he'll come over to greet you

a  potential friend.
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 4th, 2022 14:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: It truly is those precious moments in life when everything stops for a simple photo with a friend. 💖
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Fay Slimm.

    What a telling Sen. my dear Teddy - -- a seagull will indeed greet you while you have bread..... loving the picture too. So good to see you posting again.

    • Teddy.15

      Dear Fay, I'm still on my hols, however I missed you all and couldn't resist to post something little, I'm still in cocktail mode, this photo I took on a deserted beach called istia, I had to reduce the size of the photo so the quality is t it's best but I adore when the seagulls come to greet us on the beach, they are huge here. 💖 Thank you dear friend 💖

    • Doggerel Dave

      Tell me another, Teddy - Mind you, this one looks like a country boy - not one of the city types I see down the quay which certainly don't require an invitation...! 😊 Neat write.

      • Teddy.15

        lol 🤣 indeed, here they are caution and polite. Thank you dear Dave. 💖

      • tallisman

        Lovely Teddy!

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dear Tallisman 💖

        • orchidee

          Good write Teddy.
          Yes, making sure we have our teef in for any photos! Will you say 'cheese'?! lol.

          • Teddy.15

            Smile cheese 🤣 🧀 🤣 😛 💖

          • L. B. Mek

            (if you offer two
            will never leave you alone
            its friends will come, too)
            a fun read
            thanks for the chuckle
            dear Poetess

            • Teddy.15

              Yes, a bunch of new friends. LoL 🤣 thank you dear Mek, I'm going off to finish my trip see you next week. 💖

            • Paul Bell

              Even if you don't offer bread, the little blighter will still come over, giving you an offer you can't refuse.

              • Teddy.15

                Dear Paul, great to see you, I know someone who once killed a seagull with a stone, doesn't really make sense, they only come for bread. I'll be back next week my friend
                Thank you. 💖

              • Neville

                reminds me of that Cyndi Lauper song 'Gulls just wanna have fun' 💖

                • Teddy.15

                  LoL 💖

                • Paul Bell

                  I'll be back. Ok Arnie, have fun.

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