-I wept-

dean langmuir

I wept today

for a passion

of an existence

that was burdened

then set free

It wasn't I that cried

It was freedom

  • Author: dean langmuir (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 3rd, 2022 18:07
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  • L. B. Mek

    (that cathartic release;
    where we commune or empathise
    so strongly, we loose a part of ourselves
    to that moment or to that
    which impacted us so strongly
    and it may take us a lifetime, to recognise
    what part of us, needed
    such repressed feeling's, to be expressed
    but, still
    as the raindrops nurture life in our world
    so do our tears, nurture
    within us...)
    just such a succinct and powerful read
    thanks for sharing, dear poet

    • dean langmuir

      Thanks for comment LB,I was watching a singer that had gone thru hard times then sang with such passion it went straight thru me.take care.

      • L. B. Mek

        yeah, music is a great vehicle
        for making those deeper connections

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