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'fare ye well' kind friends
'fare ye well' kind friends
Moonlight face-timing
(a Jue Ju poem)
lost gaze - moon pale - Li Bai scenes
blank stare - night bare - drin king sins
name blink - bright shine - hope ful hymn
face looms - sweet tears - mo bile screens
© L. B. Mek
May 2018
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Author:
L. B. Mek (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ( https://100tangpoems.wordpress.com/2020/04/05/quiet-night-thought-li-bai/ ) Li Bai's original
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This jue ju poetry is the juice! Thanks for sharing!
so much tradition, a lovely poetic form
we ruin it in translation, but hey
we can't all learn Mandarin.. lol
so glad you enjoyed it dear Poet, thank you!
'maz ing - jen re - new to me
clev er - word play - po et ry
new rules - there to - learn one day
soo ner - la ter - who's to say
glad you had fun with it, thanks Dusk
L.B. I have to say I am not familiar with this form but thank you for introducing me to it. Beautiful.
yeah I thought a poet of your merit would enjoy it
it is wonderfully tricky
hard to get right, if you want to take it seriously
but a lot of fun trying..
thank you!
Elated by fine collection of words. Nicely composed.
thank you! dear Poet
(Li Bo/Bai/Po
is one of my absolute favourites
and this is a modern twist
as reply, to his best known poem
glad you enjoyed my effort)
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