when I looked,
the sea lied flat like a carpet to walk on
then time came for us to be seated
we seated, facing the same direction
smiles on our faces evaporated out of the canoe
OMG! it shaked steadily
as the paddles pushed, it pushed
faster than a hundred men's strength
when I looked, trees ran as we ran
at the same pace
near the shore, it lied shallow
i saw fishes of different colors
in the deep, there's no sign of them
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Author:
Osei Zion (Pseudonym) (
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Now this gave me the thought that it would make a great intro to a horror movie... scant scenes.
Thanks
Ha! You've lived my life. It's great fun canoeing and deceptive as well!
Haha scary as life turns to be sweet on the biggest trap
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