Unwriting each poem
word by word
My thoughts again
—pristine
(Dreamsleep: August, 2022)
To The Bone
The shorter the sentence
the greater the impact
Its focus unchallenged
—its meaning refined
(Dreamsleep: August, 2022)
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Author:
Kurt Philip Behm (
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Comments1
this is why, I hate reading my own work
decades later, and there will still be
a syllable
out of place or a coma, whose very existence
is so intrudingly loud..
best, maybe
to just glimpse over them, from time to time
let them remind us
of the who, we were
when we inked those words
or the what, we were going through
that inspired those rhymes;
everything else
is lost, to that very moment
we inked that last alphabet;
this
be the bane, of all creativity
(in my humble opinion)
🙂
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