It’s a strange word,loneliness.
It is a word that lingers at the end of your tongue,it is a word the plagues both the mind and soul. It is a strange word,loneliness.
whether you or I are in a crowded room where the air is hot and suffocation is near and your favourite people surround you. Still it lingers. Like a shadow it creeps; like a parasite it feeds.Till it consumes all your emotions and leaves you with nothing.Nothing but empty. Empty and numb, empty and afraid.
loneliness
It is an indescribable pain,an unmanageable hunger, an unquenchable thirst. It is a word.That I am all to familiar with, a word that I have the misfortune of befriending
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Author:
m.xsm (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hello! This is the first poem I’ve ever written,I hope to receive feedback and criticism in order to improve.Thank you so much for reading
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
I love it maybe having some sentences should be standalone.
If that was your first time that was amazing!! I love the similies and metaphors because loneliness is a parasite thanks for the read!!
Thank you so much for the comment and for reading!
I’ll take all that you said into account and try include stand alone sentences. And yes it was my first so I hope to improve more in the future,again thank you so much
Beautiful.
loneliness, an indescribable pain
all your struggles in this go vain
no one can feel how hurt you are
You are a part of this war
but never have to feel alone
cuz everyone is going through the same.
Wish I had a clown
I could have slept forever from the reality
escaping from this tragedy
I am in awe at how you describe loneliness. It's so true and can not be described better. You'll go far, mate. This is a masterpiece
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