Sometimes I think
Of how beautiful I could be,
Just lying there -
Face cold and bare -
Never having another care,
While everyone feels my despair.
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Author:
jay scott sterling (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: yea sad feelings time again woo /s. im just really tired & came up w/ this. later
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
couldn't help relating
to your honesty and bravery, dear poet
succinctly written and devoid of unnecessary, dramatics
reads like raw emotionality, reaching out
through a canvas, inked
with a trace of hope..
forgive me
your words inspired me to scribble a little reply:
(indeed, that 'great perhaps'
of utter nothingness, where
musical melodies, serenade
in that serene silence
of unmistakeable, stillness
there is romance in that imagery
in that, blank nothingness
but such thoughts are often born
of our selfish mood swings
where all is 'woe is me' convenient
see, in actuality
we know, already
that somewhere, someplace
someone is enduring
hundred times, a harder life
much worse, than we are
and is still, smiling bravely
for those mere handful few
that may be sad
to wave that final goodbye...)
thank u & ur always welcome to scribble replies
Just discovered your portfolio. Powerful emotions in your poems. So clear and well penned.
aaa thank uuu :))
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