Dear Ana, pt2

Ajax (he/xe)

Dear Ana,

You’re a great friend. 

You helped me lose all this weight

I look so much better

Still fat, of course

But less so.

I’ve been getting tired lately

And dizzy when I stand up

That means it’s working, right?

Thank you, Ana.

Love, Tess

  • Author: Ajax (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 10th, 2022 11:07
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 19
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Comments1

  • L. B. Mek

    thanks for sharing, dear poet
    but this went over my head, sadly
    I read the loud sarcasm, but
    couldn't quite understand, why
    being overweight
    is not a crime
    and you should never feel
    like your worth, depends
    on your aesthetic appearance
    but
    we must, all
    be weary of our health;
    and if you're becoming healthier
    that's a good thing, I think
    please
    don't believe the 'lizzo's' of the world
    once they've made their money
    they'll be shrinking to a healthier size
    cos they wanna prolong their life...



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