The sun always sets, after it rise(s),
But once love comes, it never dies.
Love stays in one’s heart, never can be stolen;
Love still stands when all else has fallen.
I was alone, then we became two,
You are my love, my only desire is you.
Never ever I thought, never ever I knew;
How much I miss, how much I love you.
Your smile is the cure of all my grief, your absence is my pain,
I know you are now disturbed, all my words are in vain.
Is it your ignorance, or is it the way you love?
Whatever it is, known to the One above.
Allah is my only hope, in His hands now all the rest,
He is the best of planners, the only One who knows the best.
I don’t know what actually I am thinking of,
But I really miss you my dear, I am still in love.
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Comments5
such a tender touch, in wording
and the yearning theme, resonates
deep
a wonderfully crafted, emotive read..
thank you! dear Poet
Thank you so much sir for such a generous feedback. Thank you so much. 😊
I like your style. Keep writing.
Thank you again. 😊
The rhymes are amazing! Wonderfully written. It's really amazing!!!!
Thank you so much my sweet sister. 😊
The rhymes are amazing! Wonderfully written. It's really amazing!!!!
The rhymes are amazing! Wonderfully written. It's really amazing!!!!
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