part of me


I gave it

I lost it

I got it back


You took it

You broke it

You put it back together


We were once

We distanced

We reconciled


Our story 

Our future

Our secret little smiles


You tell me 

It's okay 

You swear you won't break me again


I forgive

I accept it 

I pray to God


You swear you'll be a better friend

You say you'll be true

Well I lost myself in loving you


You ask if I'm whole again

But I never will be again

Cause now that we're better

Part of me is part of you

  • Author: Adela (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 12th, 2022 16:32
  • Comment from author about the poem: To the boy behind my poem "he" You know who you are
  • Category: Friendship
  • Views: 36


  • Bella Shepard

    To read your poem is to see the honest dissection of a relationship. Recognizing that in the end, love can overcome all obstacles when two are of one mind. A great write my new friend!

    • Adela

      Thank you so much for the compliment!

    • tallisman

      This is a neat poem, enjoyed this. I quite enjoyed the brevity of the style! Clever!

      • Adela

        Thanks for the kind words, I really appreciate them 🙂

      • Fewer_true_words

        Poetry is and art and a masterpiece is made with all of your poems. Everything made by ourselves is a masterpiece in our eyes, and you have to realize it's for you and helps you in ways you could never imagine. I love your poetry and hope to maybe talk.

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