-Symphonic sadness-

dean langmuir

The cadence

of a lonely heart

The beat of a tired drum

The sound of a tear

repeated

Together they make music

in my soul

Symphonic is my sadness

as it listens

  • Author: dean langmuir (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 16th, 2022 16:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: I don't feel like this anymore , but I do sense when others do
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 10
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Comments2

  • Fay Slimm.

    The title drew my close attention to this poignant lament dean - - you capture the music of sadness so well in this tellng nine-liner.

    • dean langmuir

      Thanks Fay,as my comments said it isn't how I feel now,but you can sense so many do,you enjoy your day and keep spreading your joy

    • Neville


      If I was able to award you full marks, then I most surely would .. brevitas superbus sir ............... Neville

      • dean langmuir

        Thank you Neville,you take care and poem on



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