The cadence
of a lonely heart
The beat of a tired drum
The sound of a tear
repeated
Together they make music
in my soul
Symphonic is my sadness
as it listens
- Author: dean langmuir ( Offline)
- Published: August 16th, 2022 16:23
- Comment from author about the poem: I don't feel like this anymore , but I do sense when others do
- Category: Sad
- Views: 10
Comments2
The title drew my close attention to this poignant lament dean - - you capture the music of sadness so well in this tellng nine-liner.
Thanks Fay,as my comments said it isn't how I feel now,but you can sense so many do,you enjoy your day and keep spreading your joy
If I was able to award you full marks, then I most surely would .. brevitas superbus sir ............... Neville
Thank you Neville,you take care and poem on
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