Pain. She's N Pain. She Deeply Feels The Strength Of The Wind.
Darquened Beyond Belief Is This Rainy Night.
Fight. She Can't Fight H.E.R. Feelings, All These Feelings. He's Gone & Never Wants 2 Come Back.
Walk, Walk, Walk. Walking Is All She Can Do. The Wind Feels Good While The Rain Pretty Much Ignored.
Lighted Sidewalk. White Pavement. Alot Of Apartment Complexes. The Nobody Else Around Part Of This Scene Sits On H.E.R. As Comfortably As The Wind.
Wound Up Days Without Him, H.E.R. Tearz Won't Stop. Hope Is Gone. He's Gone.
Alone, She Walks N The Wind & Rain.
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Author:
Broken Ankh (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 17th, 2022 12:10
- Comment from author about the poem: Of The Deepest Hurting.
- Category: Love
- Views: 15
- User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments2
Brilliant!
(and she looks-up, searching
but in-place of stars and wonder's
there's just satellite debris
glaring back, in that dull
of a restless night
as-if stating loud, in her mind
even up here, its all just sht
others throw out
while others, still
can barely dream and aspire
to reach)
Very Glad U Liked, My Friend. Your Thoughts On My Piece Mesh Perfectly With My Wisdom. I'm Glad 2 Have, Again, Sharpened Your Sword & Inspired A Champion Even Mightier Than I. Stay Eazy, Brother:L.B.
we all equal, so no such thing
as mightier dear poet, but i'll try to keep-up
and sync
with your U>NI>Q creativity, thank you!
I very much like your style! Very unique. Descriptive. All while displaying tremendous emotion with few words…
Thankz Genuinely, My Nu Friend. Peace, Love, & Blessings. *Smile*
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