Lost in a sea of Dandelions,
Wandering by chance, to my heart
You leave behind airy trails,
Drowning me in melancholy
"To laugh or To cry?" I wonder
For an echo, of a past abandoned
A layer of mist covers my eyes,
Melting your silhouette to Time
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Author:
Aradhya (
Offline) - Published: August 19th, 2022 23:02
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
A reflection or a remembrance, I thought, of someone close to the poet. Your first two lines reminded me of Wordsworth. "'To laugh or To cry?' I wonder" caused me to believe this memory was an emotional one, maybe a loss of someone close. It happened a while ago, thus the mention of "Time." That's what I got from this well crafted poem of yours. I enjoyed reading this and found it to be very sincere and personal . O.K. so I loved it. - Phil A.
Phil thank you so much for your encouraging words and for taking a moment to notice my words and to give them a much deeper meaning!
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