Vinegar Oil Chips

Jonas Robinson

A man barely Twenty, answering the calling to the street draft military

Swiftly stabbing, punching and blubbing 

Was shot and left in an alleyway


Those of the women who respected his movements, his enchantments and his dignity

Are in therapy for life, in an addiction, obsession and lifestyle

Of vinegar oil chips

  • Author: Jonas Robinson (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 22nd, 2022 22:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: I have no intention to offend anyone of any racial or sexual character. If, I have, I apologize. Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry. :)
  • Category: Sociopolitical
  • Views: 22


  • KeneBujold

    not sure I understand it Jonas, which makes it all the more interesting as I enjoy provocative thoughts that challenge me to think outside my own box

  • MissDulcinea

    Interesting and provocative. I don’t quite understand, but that’s okay. Definitely thought provoking.

  • hotidris

    Nice poem about the women who are in therapy for their addiction to vinegar oil chips.

  • Aradhya

    not quite sure i understand jonas, but it's interesting, thought provoking and i absolutely loved the word flow.

  • Jonas Robinson

    I appreciate the feedback and critique of all of those who have replied to this poem. 🙂

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