A man barely Twenty, answering the calling to the street draft military
Swiftly stabbing, punching and blubbing
Was shot and left in an alleyway
Those of the women who respected his movements, his enchantments and his dignity
Are in therapy for life, in an addiction, obsession and lifestyle
Of vinegar oil chips
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Author:
Jonas Robinson (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I have no intention to offend anyone of any racial or sexual character. If, I have, I apologize. Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry. :)
- Category: Sociopolitical
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Comments4
not sure I understand it Jonas, which makes it all the more interesting as I enjoy provocative thoughts that challenge me to think outside my own box
Interesting and provocative. I don’t quite understand, but that’s okay. Definitely thought provoking.
not quite sure i understand jonas, but it's interesting, thought provoking and i absolutely loved the word flow.
I appreciate the feedback and critique of all of those who have replied to this poem. 🙂
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