On Being Too Gentle
The extraordinary
gentleness
of his unexpected
advances ..
Though indeed
subtle, to say the
very least ..
Failed to take her
by surprise ..
Nor did they cause
her alarm ..
On the contrary
my dear friend ..
She, being
very well versed
in the art
of seduction herself
was both
thrilled and highly
delighted
to teach him the
very error, of his ways ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Says it all. Oh how wrong we get it sometimes.
absolutely spot on ......... cheers DA
What were the details of the 'error'? Don't answer that, or I will swoon! Or at least, don't answer how she corrected the error. heehee.
Wish granted .......................................................... 🙂
Phew! You did not answer it. It would be TMI - Too Much Info. lol.
Ha ha - gentle approaches be blowed to this well versed lady - -- I am laughing aloud Nev at the cleverness you use to show her at the game - -once a seductress always the same eh ? - - brilliant piece of penning....................x
absolutely bloomin gert lush Fay ................ x
Couldn't be more clear 😅 oh how wrong they go. Brilliant!
thank you both kindly and true ............................. Neville 🙂
Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it exposes her hidden talents without actually calling them out.
"On Being Too Gentle," I think he at least had the spirit to engage.
Oh, woe is he! - Phil A.
You have that certain eye .. don't 'cha 🙂
A smooth change of pace portrayed in your piece; Improvisation the name of the game, Neville....ask and thou shalt receive....maybe 🙂
maybe being the operative word ......................... perhaps 🙂
I regret it wasn’t me, for had I in my youth, while being rejected - lessons learnt would have played an important role.
Just as I am learning how to scribe a lasting piece.
I think you do just fine my friend .. and thank you for your encouraging comments and ongoing support ...... Neville
It sounds like you it just right, I'd call it the "Goldilocks Approach". Very, very clever my friend!
Thank you my friend .. Neville
A fab poem on how men can be taught new ways and get surprised themselves instead of alarming. Sublime and subtle muse. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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