On Being Too Gentle

Neville

On Being Too Gentle

 

The extraordinary

gentleness

of his unexpected

advances ..

Though indeed

subtle, to say the

very least ..

Failed to take her

by surprise ..

Nor did they cause

her alarm ..

On the contrary

my dear friend ..

She, being

very well versed

in the art

of seduction herself

was both

thrilled and highly

delighted

to teach him the

very error, of his ways ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 3rd, 2022 00:41
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  • dusk arising

    Says it all. Oh how wrong we get it sometimes.

    • Neville



      absolutely spot on ......... cheers DA

    • orchidee

      What were the details of the 'error'? Don't answer that, or I will swoon! Or at least, don't answer how she corrected the error. heehee.

      • Neville



        Wish granted .......................................................... πŸ™‚

        • orchidee

          Phew! You did not answer it. It would be TMI - Too Much Info. lol.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Ha ha - gentle approaches be blowed to this well versed lady - -- I am laughing aloud Nev at the cleverness you use to show her at the game - -once a seductress always the same eh ? - - brilliant piece of penning....................x

          • Neville



            absolutely bloomin gert lush Fay ................ x

          • shaa

            Couldn't be more clear πŸ˜… oh how wrong they go. Brilliant!

            • Neville



              thank you both kindly and true ............................. Neville πŸ™‚

            • MendedFences27

              Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
              Well written, it exposes her hidden talents without actually calling them out.
              "On Being Too Gentle," I think he at least had the spirit to engage.
              Oh, woe is he! - Phil A.

              • Neville



                You have that certain eye .. don't 'cha πŸ™‚

              • Doggerel Dave

                A smooth change of pace portrayed in your piece; Improvisation the name of the game, Neville....ask and thou shalt receive....maybe πŸ™‚

                • Neville



                  maybe being the operative word ......................... perhaps πŸ™‚

                • SureshG

                  I regret it wasn’t me, for had I in my youth, while being rejected - lessons learnt would have played an important role.
                  Just as I am learning how to scribe a lasting piece.

                  • Neville



                    I think you do just fine my friend .. and thank you for your encouraging comments and ongoing support ...... Neville

                  • Bella Shepard

                    It sounds like you it just right, I'd call it the "Goldilocks Approach". Very, very clever my friend!

                    • Neville



                      Thank you my friend .. Neville

                    • 🐀s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                      A fab poem on how men can be taught new ways and get surprised themselves instead of alarming. Sublime and subtle muse. Kudos!

                      Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

                      • Neville



                        thank you for checking in & considering my recent scribble .. your request of course will be complied with ..



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