I watched her as she spun
In a garden full of daisies
With a few thorny roses
And a ribbon running lose in her hair
I watched her as she spun
In her navy blue dress
With golden locks, dancing
And a ribbon running loose in her hair
I watched her as she spun
In euphoria she was
With relaxation on her face
And a ribbon running loose in her hair
I watched her as she spun
Knowing well I couldn't be with her
As my darkness would erase her light
And a ribbon running loose in her hair
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Author:
F.B.R (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 6th, 2022 03:57
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about how people living happily experience joyful things and don't care about minor disturbances, just like the girl who was spinning in a garden full of daisies with a few thorny roses and didn't care about the ribbon running loose in her hair. On the other hand, people who live sadly experience darkness and notice negativity, and never advance from their dark place, just like the speaker in the poem who noticed even the thorny roses in a garden filled with daisies and her ribbon and didn't think positively about how they could get out of darkness to be with the girl.
- Category: Love
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