A song is a descriptive outflow of words
By which a nature lover describes a flower or a bird
A song is an expressions of emotions pent up
And the love of a human for another, or a pup
Geniuses may write beautiful songs
But amateurs like me can’t do it for long
For the complicated verses require much time
And the writer has to tick, while the clock merrily chimes
As a clever poet said “poems are written by fools like me
But only God can make a tree”
We find the source of everything is God
Who is our undisputable sovereign and Lord
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safina (Pseudonym) (
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A beautiful poem of nature, poetry and God's art acknowledged. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
thank you dear..yes i will
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of the doubt of the everyday writer of his or her competence or genius. Trying to express what a poem, or song, is is always a challenge. Thanks for sharing your unvarnished thoughts on the matter, with sincerity and wit.
PS Your title is a double entendre, because "song" is both your subject and your medium. Its a song about song. Good on you!
thanks for the insight offered..this was written when i was a teenager, and have reproduced it as it was without amendments.. the final lines did seem a bit out of place for me too when i re-read it but then i realized that God is the final creator - there is no creativity without him, so submitted it as it was..
have a good day
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