I'm done it's over I can't believe you shut me down what a surprise this world is forever changing but age doesn't remain the same I hear cars honking no more walking and people in a hurry so the time No one's talking phone glued to your hands and music blasting in your ears you tube on continuously no more playing outside Oh I'm so tired moms are working no more cooking grandma's raising grand children and dad's are absent from the homes exercising unimportant and family time unheard shopping was one fun until self check out came. alone robots taking over everywhere where did the humans go I really want to know is a change really coming
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Sultra, this piece is so vivid and sincere... the run-on form is so compelling, perfect for what you are saying... explicit but full of overtones of meaning and emotion. Thank you for giving me this moment of humanity before I go to bed...
PS "Self check-out" is so ambiguous... I laughed at that! Right before I cried. I like this more each time I read it!
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