how i see you see me
i laugh too much and i'm really tall
i'm an attention whore, another booty call
i'm nosy with feelings and i hug too long
i'm the happiest person among us all
i'm never upset and i smile all the time
that i turn heads from every guy
that i am ecstatic to even be alive
that my body is beautiful
that my confidence is top tear
that nothing could bring at my deepest fear
that im so sexy and im an amazing friend
that there will never be a day my friendships will end
that ive never experienced trauma in my youth
but little do you know none of this is the truth
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mw (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this is about how i view someone else's perception of me, but knowing myself better, and knowing none of it is true.
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Extremely beautiful and well thought out. You are very perceptive.
I appreciate the kind words. This is the first piece of writing I have ever shared, so thank you!!
You're very welcome!! I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Some lines I liked... 'i'm an attention whore, another booty call' especially the attention part, 'that i turn heads from every guy' now this one has me thinking on how you view yourself since this is someone else's view on you which you end up denying in the end
Yes, I have always had a problem capturing point of views since everything I write is originally written \"to someone\". kind of like a journal entry haha
Ooh 😅 I get you
I really love the piece. Nailed it.
thank you very much
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