How I see you see me

morgenw

how i see you see me

i laugh too much and i'm really tall

i'm an attention whore, another booty call

i'm nosy with feelings and i hug too long

i'm the happiest person among us all

i'm never upset and i smile all the time

that i turn heads from every guy

that i am ecstatic to even be alive

that my body is beautiful

that my confidence is top tear

that nothing could bring at my deepest fear

that im so sexy and im an amazing friend

that there will never be a day my friendships will end

that ive never experienced trauma in my youth

but little do you know none of this is the truth

  • Author: mw (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 11th, 2022 18:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: this is about how i view someone else's perception of me, but knowing myself better, and knowing none of it is true.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 22
  • Users favorite of this poem: darknessandlight
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  • darknessandlight

    Extremely beautiful and well thought out. You are very perceptive.

    • morgenw

      I appreciate the kind words. This is the first piece of writing I have ever shared, so thank you!!

      • darknessandlight

        You're very welcome!! I look forward to seeing more of your work.

      • shaa

        Some lines I liked... 'i'm an attention whore, another booty call' especially the attention part, 'that i turn heads from every guy' now this one has me thinking on how you view yourself since this is someone else's view on you which you end up denying in the end

        • morgenw

          Yes, I have always had a problem capturing point of views since everything I write is originally written \"to someone\". kind of like a journal entry haha

          • shaa

            Ooh 😅 I get you

          • _lonely__side

            I really love the piece. Nailed it.

            • morgenw

              thank you very much



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