crypticbard

hands off that snooze button!

 

 

 

 

 

~ impressIONS ~

Comments5

  • Teddy.15

    Extremely beautiful 💖

    • crypticbard

      Thanks Teddy, glad that its beauty is discernible.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Inspiringly good and alive with empowerment these fine linguistic invites. This goes into my faves.

      • crypticbard

        Thanks Fay. It makes me so glad that there is an empowering and an inviting to be had.

      • Tony Grannell

        A profound wakeup call in the true art of poetry and a wonderful command of the English language. The couplets bring it all together to form an unremitting verse into the final awakning and thus - the light. Excellent!

        Kind regards,

        Tony.

        • crypticbard

          Thanks Tony. I suppose, if memory serves, this was written in the belly of an absinthian reverie. But for sure it was in a worked up mood, perhaps after seething at the news on the telly for the nth time.

        • Doggerel Dave

          Never thought I'd do this - just faved it without commentary....

          • crypticbard

            LOL. That was dog gone good. Cheers mate.

          • sorenbarrett

            This conjured up feelings long buried. I particularly liked "release the soul's query how can one forgive what is forgotten" A great line that gives pause.

            • crypticbard

              Thanks Soren. That means a lot to hear bout conjuring long buried feelings. And yes, that line about forgiving and forgetting is quite likable, in my thinking. Cheers.



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