hands off that snooze button!

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  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 22nd, 2022 03:56
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 12
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., Doggerel Dave.
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Comments4

  • Fay Slimm.

    Inspiringly good and alive with empowerment these fine linguistic invites. This goes into my faves.

    • arqios

      Thanks Fay. It makes me so glad that there is an empowering and an inviting to be had.

    • Tony Grannell

      A profound wakeup call in the true art of poetry and a wonderful command of the English language. The couplets bring it all together to form an unremitting verse into the final awakning and thus - the light. Excellent!

      Kind regards,

      Tony.

      • arqios

        Thanks Tony. I suppose, if memory serves, this was written in the belly of an absinthian reverie. But for sure it was in a worked up mood, perhaps after seething at the news on the telly for the nth time.

      • Doggerel Dave

        Never thought I'd do this - just faved it without commentary....

        • arqios

          LOL. That was dog gone good. Cheers mate.

        • sorenbarrett

          This conjured up feelings long buried. I particularly liked "release the soul's query how can one forgive what is forgotten" A great line that gives pause.

          • arqios

            Thanks Soren. That means a lot to hear bout conjuring long buried feelings. And yes, that line about forgiving and forgetting is quite likable, in my thinking. Cheers.



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