I
pale bodies chalking the water,
their gum-pink shoulders rolling
in the dark like celestial objects;
our nakedness, and the earth’s
lightning snaps like a blown bulb –
furious sky-god –
so those with their backs to the horizon,
are suddenly crowned: blazing aureoles,
wrists crossed on their tailbones
as if waiting for judgement,
handcuffed in awe.
half-crystallised, sharply inhaling, alarmed
that beauty isn’t peaceful, but shocking,
that we’ve crossed a line:
and we’d suddenly rather be on the shore,
where a fire burns on the sand
and nobody dreams
quite this big.
II
the curtain tore open
and showered rags around
our hoary moon-shadows,
and we stood, for the first time,
like matchsticks in the infinite
black water.
and the earth made clear
its groaning, its sickness,
its fury – impossibly close.
we’re cemented to our chest
in amniotic fluid
as the earth reveals itself:
rolling over, laid bare.
and we, the firstfruits,
stumble, dazed, to the shoreline,
groping for the light,
bearing the weight of ourselves,
of our opening.
- Author: Ryan Robson-Bluer ( Offline)
- Published: October 1st, 2022 04:46
- Comment from author about the poem: There was something so incredible about that moment: standing there in our most vulnerable state, completely naked and exposed, shivering and solitary, and watching as the sky opened up in this huge display of power and energy. It was like the earth revealed something.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
Beautiful and powerful, I felt like I was there.
Thanks very much!
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