Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
Inconsequential Wonderings
Do you remember
the last time
you danced for him ..
He told me
you were naked and
glowed ..
Can you remember
the last time
you fought with him ..
Well, he
swore he could hear
the roar
of the sea, in the shell
of your ear,
as you did then, beat up
on him ..
And do you ever recall
the last time
you dined with him ..
I note he
chewed fast while you
invariably
tend to swallow deep
and so
deliciously slow ..
Well today,
yet again, I find myself
wondering
if you still have the taste
of him on
the tip of your tongue ..
Because
for some reason, or other
I still do
occasionally question
how far you
did go with your love
for him ..
That is, before you gave
a thought to
maybe first letting me go ..
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Neville (
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Comments3
First rate penning again mon ami and I think not inconsequential these clever questions for they will whet appetites for more of this oh so beguiling story..................x
Thanks Fay, this is one of them old uns I found while poking around in the attic ... x
This one touches deeply. Are there truly degrees of love, a scale that measures it's depth? I think the human heart can only be truly quantified by the person within whom it beats. So poignantly written my dear friend!
I love the deepness of your perusal dear Bella & the consequent questions that arise from it .. I think and hope you are write .. I sincerely hope that you are ........... Neville
An unanswered question if ever there was one, Nev. Close intimate human relationships are always unfinished, aren't they?
I not only concur Dave in its entirety, I also thank you too for reading between the lines & seeing where I am coming from ... Neville
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