Excuse Me I Love You She Said
Excuse me, I love you she said
but pray treat me gentle ..
I may not be fragile or precious
in the classical sense ..
Yet I can be awfully dangerous
when frightened, abused or provoked ..
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Author:
Neville (
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What an alluring title mon ami - -- the lady was playing wisely with issues of future behaviour. and gentle or dangerous she knew the ropes before love moved in. Some readers will relate to these words - including me if I might say...........x
Good evening Fay, thanking you is a habit I hope I may neva grow out of ......... x
She sounds a woman of good sense, as well as beguiling. Best to lay the ground works up front, no surprises? But then a surprise here and there lends a little spice. So playfully and temptingly written my friend!
Thank you Bella, that'll do nicely my friend ... in fact, it'll do very nicely indeed 🙂
Look out mate, if provocation puts you in "dangerous" territory. Could be a rocky road ahead.
"Excuse me, I love you," had me thinking this was to a whimsical love poem, but that thought ended with her declaration of self-reliance. - Phil A.
Sound advice Phil & thank you again kind sir .. Neville
Fairer and gentler but equally able and capable. A little respect and prudence goes a long long way! At least the signal was there and the disclaimer. What more is needed to arrive at a suitable consensus?
absolutely cb .. spot on sir ............. N 🙂
Can I drag that last stanza completely out of context and make it mine, Nev?
absolutely DD consider it yours sir 🙂
Yep, reckon I'll meet her, but not get on the wrong side of her! lol.
Correct answer and a wise choice Mr O 🙂
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