Approach.
How far is near ?
Careening toward fate
yet out of reach
spins merciless space.
Approach spot
of heart-calls attracts
first dissipation.
Yet love-light outpaces
competing needs.
Apart will be near when
far-off disappears.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: October 11th, 2022 05:18
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Comments4
I approached this good write Fay!
Thanking you kindly dear Orchi
Here you kick off with a question that has intrigued me for ever .. and then you sum it all up in eight words and two lines at the end ... magic Fay 🙂 x
Glad you saw through drawn curtains to secret longings - chuffed no end too that you liked the short finalé - -- I like being magic mon ami - - muchas gracias and more.................x
Feels so close I could actually touch your poem 🙂 I like the first question!
Thanking you friend for stopping by for a read and comment - so glad you enjoyed Approach.
You are very welcome Fay!
When far-off disappears into proximity, that is bliss! Thanks Fay
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